Looking for feedback on my landing page before launch
I have been working on a small analytics tool for about four months. The landing page is finally up, but I keep explaining the product the way I would explain it to another founder. If you have five minutes, I would like to know where the value gets fuzzy.
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Respectfully, "If you have five minutes, I would like to know where the value gets fuzzy" is an observation, not yet a decision. What number would make you reverse it?
Which will a visitor notice first: the picture, or the thing "The landing page is finally up, but I keep explaining the product the way I would explain it to another founder" is holding in place?
I have been adjacent to this. The sentence I would not skip is "I have been working on a small analytics tool for about four months". Finding who it is for mattered more than adding another feature.
I had the same problem. Naming the person and the hour it saves them worked better than naming the category. 'Weekly metrics without a tracking plan' tested clearer than 'product analytics'.
The first screen tells me what it does, then the next three tell me the architecture. I would keep one concrete job on the hero and move the stack talk under a docs link.
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View more- I am keeping the plainer headline for another week
Nobody praised it. Two people repeated it back correctly. That is the test I said I would use, so I am using it, even though the sharper line is still in a draft.
Chloe MartinBuild in Public187 votes6 comments
- I do not have logos yet. What should the proof be?
Quoting myself feels worse than an empty page. I have three kind emails and no permission to name the companies. The page currently has no proof at all.
Elena CostaFeedback Request8 votes7 comments
- I added a short 'this is not' section
It lists two products people confuse us with. A tester said it was the first moment they understood us. I was afraid it would sound defensive. It sounded like a boundary.
Chloe MartinBuild in Public6 votes4 comments
- I changed the headline and lost the only clear sentence
The old headline was plain and a little dull. The new one sounds sharper and two people asked what the product actually does. I think I optimized for taste.